1. Put your adjectives after your nouns.
"The tiger, marvellously striped and irritable, leaps..."
2. Delay the subject of your sentence.
"Because I could not stop for Death--He kindly stopped for me..." Emily Dickinson
3. An interruption: Put something between your subject and your verb.
"And what rough beast, its hour come round at last, slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?" William Butler Yeats, 'The Second Coming'
4. Start with a pronoun and then give us the noun it refers to.
"What do they sing, the last birds, coasting down the twilight..." G. Kinnell, "Last Songs"
5. Double or triple your subject, but use one verb.
"The snows of the Tyrol, the clear beer of Vienna, are not very pure or true..." Sylvia Plath
Jill...which one do you like the best?
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